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Thursday, October 27, 2016

Narrative writting-Mysteriously disappear

It was a foggy morning James and Marcus were down in the living quarters discussing their arrival at the mysterious island people often mistook Marcus for a pirate with his big bushy beard his scars on his face and his pirate like accent and James was a young buck with his devices his shiny hair and his stubble.        

Marcus had been searching for this island for most of his life he’s been studying this island tracking it and he knows what to expect when he see’s it. James studded coordinates in high school he’s an
explorer he met Marcus at a tavern in Ireland James was asking around for information on where a good place to explore would be like old ruins or ship grave yards. Then he meets Marcus. Marcus was staying in a room up stairs James went up to Marcus and asked him where a good place to explore would be Marcus asked if he'd like to accompany him on his journey James excitedly said yes. Marcus tells James about the mysterious island.

 Marcus pulled out his powerful spotlight and mounted it onto the stern of the boat a powerful beam of light shone through the mist that revealed a rocky shoreline James didn't notice until they crashed into a huge rock James was knocked unconscious and Marcus struggled trying to keep James from drowning. James woke up three hours later Marcus was scavenging the boat wreck for supplies. He moved James under a shelter he made out of palm leaves Marcus manages to find and fix the boat radio he tries to call for help but there's no response James comes over to try and help find some supplies they managed to find some food and water rations. They set up camp and waited for help the next day. When they woke up they were surprised their food rations had disappeared they began investigating but all they could find was sand and debris.

The disappearance of their food rations gave them a good reason to explore the island for clues or treasure or the culprit who took their food. During their exploration they came across some beautiful sights like crystal clear rivers waterfalls caves they decided to take a break and cool of in a beautiful lake that was fresh enough to drink they refilled their canteens and headed back to their shelter when they got back their shelter was gone they confused how could something quietly have snuck past them and just taken their shelter with only the posts that held up the shelter remaining they had no time to go back into the jungle and look for their missing food and shelter it was getting dark and they needed food and somewhere to sleep Marcus started fishing and James searched for a good place to build their shelter. James managed to find a little spot where the ground overhung the ground below. James began building and started a campfire. Marcus lugged the fish he caught back to the new shelter in a fishing net they salvaged from the boat wreck they made spit and cooked the fish over the fire. They decided that they should take turns watching to see if anything else would mysteriously disappear James was on watch duty but he forgot to swap places with Marcus and fell asleep.

When they woke up there fish that they caught was gone but the culprit who took their things had left trails of fish behind they were about to follow the trail but they thought they couldn’t just go following the trail unarmed they could be running into a bear cave or a tree full of wild screamer monkeys so they decided to make spears. They followed the trail it lead to a crashed plane they found their missing things but no culprit they  looked around they found the person who’s been taking their things it was another crash survivor they confronted him he didn’t know that it was their things he was taking he only took their radio because he was trying to signal for help and the other things were for food and supplies. He said a rescue helicopter would come and rescue them the next day.

They waited till the next day and prepared for their rescue they salvaged everything they could from the wreckage of their boat and made some rucksacks with plant fibers. They made an S.O.S signal with seashells, seaweed and driftwood the rescue helicopter saw their signal and landed the rescue crew helped them aboard they were given something to eat and drink during the flight Marcus and James were going through their photos that they took Marcus had a mile long grin on his face then James says so where are we going next.    

Hidden curriculum/Prefix quiz

Underline all the words in the passage that contain a long ‘’i’’ sound.

One day in july, I decided to fly my kite for the first time. My friend brian gave me the kite for my birthday five days ago. When I looked outside this morning, I saw a blue sky. Finally a fine day for the last week, the weather had been wild. Winds were as strong as a cyclone. I grabbed the kite and hopped my bike my house is only a short ride to the seaside and there are piles of sand dunes that i often climb that are perfect for flying a kite.

Exercise: Prefix Quiz.


  1. What is the difference between a unicycle, a bicycle and a tricycle. Which would be harder to ride and why? A unicycle would be harder to ride because uni means one that means there's one wheel.
  2. Which place would be warmer a subtropical place or a tropical place? A tropical place. Name a tropical place Mexico. Name a sub tropical place Taiwan.