What picture did you see in your head when you read the introduction. Describe in detail. Dad watching the moon and studying the lunar phases when the tide and weather is right.
White Thinking Hat: Who are the characters? Describe them. Whanau and friends.
Tell me in detail what this story is about. Gathering kaimoana.
Which character did you dislike? Why? The kid in the cyan hoodie because he was just throwing the eels onto the shore like it was a stick.
Which part of the story bored you? What may have caused you to get bored? The intro because nothing exciting was really happening.
If you could change any part of this story which one would it be? The first sentence of the body. I would have made shorter by saying we started playing.
Conclusion: Was the end predictable? Tell me why? Why not? Yes because i predicted that the tide would rise and the eels would have continued to swim to the sea.
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- Absence 2. Acceptable 3. Accidentally 4. Accommodate 5. Achieve
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